Evaluation of Preliminary task

In our preliminary task we was trying to tell the story of a 'hit man' who is getting the job to kill someone. The story shows the meeting of a rich and powerful person. A lot of the backstory is left untold to leave suspense for the audience. I think the camera work we used was fairly good. The only issue with that was the shot where the camera goes around the hit man's face. In thought this was a very good idea. However where we was filming made it difficult as it was a very small area, this meant it was hard for sam, our cameraman, to circle me with the camera. Other mistakes we made was still hearing someone shout "action" in the background at the start of the film. This was a mistake that should have been corrected when editing. The good elements of the film was the way that the film flowed. This was due to the way in which we edited it. For example putting certain scenes after where they was originally supposed to be. This lead to a more natural feel to the film. The improvements we could make are to do with the film and plot in general. Mainly the setting. It is quiet clear we are filming in a school. Even though it is supposed to be the office of rich and powerful business man. if we were to film this now we would make it more obvious that shamma is powerful and dangerous by the setting and miss-en-scene.